“Mpreg Month-Week 4 Alpha Beta Omega Wolf”

“Really, Sam, I’m gone for a few months and you go and get yourself knocked up like a common whore? Forgot to use a condom? Do you even know who the father is or are you completely in the dark? Good thing your body is rejecting the little parasite.”
Just finished reading this and am left with warm fuzzy feelings. I think this author must have loved this story because they cared enough to make sure it was nearly devoid of those annoying grammar errors. In addition to this, the characters were well developed and the story really drew me in. I could count on one hand the number of typos (total of three. I looked before writing this), which annoys me to the point where I highlight each and every error and notate what I believe the correction should be. Yeah, it bugs me that much. I figure if I’m going to give any author my money they should at least trouble themselves enough to reread their own work and clean it up.
Just as he got into the circle he felt something warm and sticky wetting his pants. What the hell? That was the last coherent thought he had before he felt the excoriating pain in his abdomen. Holy shit, it’s true that, due to the stress of Dean dying and disappearing, he had had pains but the doctor had reassured him the baby was fine, even if it was kinda small. He knew what was happening now; he was in labor.
You as a reader may be thinking “How the fuck did that happen?” Well dear reader, there are two people to blame here, Medic and Sniper (sort of). Medic, for implanting a uterus in Spy without his knowledge (for science of course), and Sniper for accidentally impregnating him afterwards. Needless to say, both Sniper and Spy were in a state of shock when they’d found out exactly why the Frenchman had been puking his guts out and was tired all the time for the past few days previously. And of course, Spy had demanded an abortion after he’d calmed down enough to stop attempting to kill both Medic and Sniper. He didn’t care if abortions were illegal or not. This would be minor compared to most of the crimes he was guilty of. Unfortunately for Spy though, the Medic had refused to do it. Not because he was pro-life or any of that crap, but because he felt it would be a waste of an interesting scientific opportunity. No matter, Spy had thought, there were always back alley doctors he could go to, many of whom were more qualified than Medic. That was until the Administrator had intervened after the Medic had begged her to do so. On her orders, he was forced to keep the pregnancy.
Professor Vale Aman has crafted a good life for himself. An unbonded omega in his mid-thirties, he’s long since given up hope that he’ll meet a compatible alpha, let alone his destined mate. He’s fulfilled by his career, his poetry, his cat, and his friends.
Though it became apparent very soon that not even many years of friendship equalled the bond of the brotherhood amongst the Seal Team. Colin was so stoic despite how he was treated, even by the man he loved, Ed Adami who put his Seal brothers before his friend of nearly twenty years. Colin kept his head up and his eyes forward – he didn’t bow or break.
At twenty-three years old, Omega Brion has still yet to experience his first heat. Brion has always admired the Alpha of his pack – from a respectable distance, of course. After all, how could a lowly Omega such as him ever even dream of an Alpha like Jasper? But when Brion’s first heat suddenly hits him in the middle of the spring festival preparations, there is only man to relieve his agony…
Hetalia – Axis Powers – Rated: T – English – Romance/Humor – Chapters: 16 – Words: 66,809 – Reviews: 97 – Favs: 81 – Follows: 52 – Updated: 10/27/2014 – Published: 6/3/2014 – [Hungary, Prussia] – Complete
Saved is the first book in the series and I enjoyed it. I didn’t end up loving it unfortunately but I absolutely enjoyed it and I really very much enjoyed seeing Braun and Tarek again in this one. In Heard, Jax is coming at his relationship with Karter from a similar emotional place as Braun was to Tarek. Both Jax and Braun are strong, independently minded omegas. They are both coming from a place of being dominated and dictated to, and are reluctant to be in a relationship because they want to be treated as equal and are wary of whether that’s possible with an Alpha. I liked the way Jax dealt with everything and how he handled all of his emotions. Although I like Braun and understood all of his trials and tribulations, I guess I felt like he came off a little bratty maybe? I’m not sure, he just didn’t melt me like Jax did. I was never turned off or had to remind myself what he had gone through to understand or justify his reactions. I guess the best way to say it is that while he was strong he wasn’t rigid, he still had soft edges.
Dane’s company is making headlines for all the wrong reasons, as rumors of nefarious activity have begun to fly; and though he is a strong, commanding and charismatic alpha, even Dane cannot stand against the slanderous onslaught that threatens to take do…wn his business.
Now to prove his brain wrong he sat waiting for his cell to tell him that the five minutes wait period is over. As if on cue his cell rang saying time was up. He grabbed the test in shaking hands. He flipped it over with closed eyes. He opened his eyes and looked at the Positive looking back at him. He scowled at
Betas are subordinate to Alphas and may or may not be able to impregnate Omegas; in some fanworks Betas aren’t present and the trope is known as Alpha/Omega, in others they take the role and functions of Omegas and Omegas aren’t present. Betas are often presented as having “normal” human anatomy with none of the special attributes of Alphas or Omegas.
I’m a huge fan of mpreg. I love seeing guys get knocked up by other guys. I don’t why but I do. I especially love my favorite anime characters get knocked up. But as a budding geneticist and heredity obsessed freak I do not like all the mistakes writers and artists make when assigning hair, eye, and skin color. I will be using both mpreg and regular preg. Most of these examples will be Naruto because that is the second biggest result on fanfiction.net when you type mpreg in search.
Alfred is a soon to be father with money problems. His job doesn’t pay enough to cover the rent and a future hospital bill. Arthur is pregnant with their first child and it turns out in a month they are going to lose their small home. NOTES: USUK and omegaverse
I really wanted to like this story, but in the end I can’t give it more than 2.5 stars. It starts off ok, but then the story gets weaker and weaker. The text itself is riddled with missing words, poor grammar, and incorrect vocabulary (ie “ravished” used to describe intense hunger. I think the writer meant “ravenous”) There were also so many holes in the plot it felt like the writer was just trying to get to the end and didn’t care about weaving a tight story. And a little fact checking/research is appreciated. For instance, the travel time between Seattle and Billings is way more than “several hours” and there are no “skyscrapers” in Billings. Google it.
“Merde” he groaned, leaning on his desk as another contraction racked his body. They were getting stronger and closer together. Each one felt like he was constantly being stabbed in the back. The irony didn’t escape Spy. He couldn’t help but think how ironic all of it was. He’d dated a few men and many women over the years. He’d got some of those women pregnant by accident, but he’d had no choice but to leave them. No doubt they would’ve had to have given the child up for adoption. And now he was, more or less, going through what they went through. Karma could work in mysterious ways sometimes no?
”GRELL! take my pants and underwear off! I’m not done! There’s another one! My water just broke again!” He screams before Grell’s eyes go wide and he pulls Sebastian up momentarily. He slides his unbuckled pants down and pulls them over his feet,Tossing them to the side before pulling his underwear down,Grabbing the baby and flinging the underwear and placenta to the side as well. Grell suctions the babies mouth and nose and  wraps the screaming baby boy up in a towel and puts him aside before helping Sebastian lower back into his squat,Rubbing his back gently and soothingly.
“Do it,” whispered Sam, nudging you towards his brother. You groaned and slapped him on the arm. You looked at the older Winchester and then quickly looked away. Dean was currently on the couch, looking through newspapers for the next hunt.
Biology has gone actually insane. The Alpha/Beta/Omega system works in a similar way to dog packs (it’s said this trope grew of werewolf!AUs). Alphas (especially Alpha males) have enormous cocks capable of knotting; Omegas (including male omegas) have a heat cycle that is based on their ability to conceive. Omegas’, er, orifices are self-lubricating, especially while they’re in heat. Pheremones fly around like mad, and there is a lot of scenting, marking and gallons and gallons of bodily fluids.